I really like this concept! It's fun and will probably make me glance around a few times next time I take the train.
Though, the gameplay could be improved in a few ways. For starters, running out of breath(?) basically insta-kills your run, which was really annoying the first time I played. It should run out faster and definitely recharge faster. Also, in my opinion, the audio cue is too obvious. Giving the mysterious man louder footsteps than the rest of the people would make sense because of his height and be more subtle and scary, especially when mixed with all the other background noise. Also, there should be less encounters with the man and more time required to escape.
The game could use some lore as well; why is no one acknowledging the giant, creepy man? Who is the protagonist, and why is this thing targeting him/her? And last and most importantly, why did the protagonist see a tall person and immediately know that it was a malevolent being? (I jest, but that's a legit critique I have. The whole disguising itself thing isn't utilized at all because half of the time its—I assume—true form is out.)
This is impressive for a first game, though! I love it!
YO FERRYLIQUID! Maaan your first attempt? This was a FIRE first attempt my guy, I had a blast with the game, very interesting concept, sick scares, and had me on my ten toesies for sure >:D keep it up!
I had fun with this game a hard stressful quick game its just not in the slight bit scary. Its is stressful but stress is not horror, the fact that you are surrounded by people 24/7 really makes it not as scary however it is a good game and I can't wait for more story for it it's just not scary at all.
The design of the creature is great and the fact it turns into other people is also cool just if he gets close behind you music starts playing so I found my self not looking around for him seeing as I knew an audio que was going to play getting rid of that would be a good way. With that I think the game would be much more suspenseful making it somewhat scarier but like I said with how many other people there are you have a sense of security even though a false one it is still there so making odd and unexpected occurrences happen like the people disappearing for a short time or the scenery and music changing to something horrific and intense (also for a short time) could make it a bit more scary. That's my opinion though this is your game and a good one at that.
I wish I played it earlier, this game has a unique style. I absolutely love the graphics and the bizarre encounter with "death" really sets a wonderful Halloween-themed game into perspective.
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I really like this concept! It's fun and will probably make me glance around a few times next time I take the train.
Though, the gameplay could be improved in a few ways. For starters, running out of breath(?) basically insta-kills your run, which was really annoying the first time I played. It should run out faster and definitely recharge faster. Also, in my opinion, the audio cue is too obvious. Giving the mysterious man louder footsteps than the rest of the people would make sense because of his height and be more subtle and scary, especially when mixed with all the other background noise. Also, there should be less encounters with the man and more time required to escape.
The game could use some lore as well; why is no one acknowledging the giant, creepy man? Who is the protagonist, and why is this thing targeting him/her? And last and most importantly, why did the protagonist see a tall person and immediately know that it was a malevolent being? (I jest, but that's a legit critique I have. The whole disguising itself thing isn't utilized at all because half of the time its—I assume—true form is out.)
This is impressive for a first game, though! I love it!
This is smart.
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YO FERRYLIQUID! Maaan your first attempt? This was a FIRE first attempt my guy, I had a blast with the game, very interesting concept, sick scares, and had me on my ten toesies for sure >:D keep it up!
I had fun with this game a hard stressful quick game its just not in the slight bit scary. Its is stressful but stress is not horror, the fact that you are surrounded by people 24/7 really makes it not as scary however it is a good game and I can't wait for more story for it it's just not scary at all.
Thank you for playing and for the feedback! Is there anything that you would suggest to make this type of game more scary in your opinion?
The design of the creature is great and the fact it turns into other people is also cool just if he gets close behind you music starts playing so I found my self not looking around for him seeing as I knew an audio que was going to play getting rid of that would be a good way. With that I think the game would be much more suspenseful making it somewhat scarier but like I said with how many other people there are you have a sense of security even though a false one it is still there so making odd and unexpected occurrences happen like the people disappearing for a short time or the scenery and music changing to something horrific and intense (also for a short time) could make it a bit more scary. That's my opinion though this is your game and a good one at that.
I almost died as they keep blocking the exit hahaha very nice ! keep it up.
Game was Really short but it was fun editing nonetheless . Enjoy the video!
This felt like I was playing a creepypasta. So good!
I enjoyed this game! Its simple, spooky, and fun to play!
I wish I played it earlier, this game has a unique style. I absolutely love the graphics and the bizarre encounter with "death" really sets a wonderful Halloween-themed game into perspective.
I look forward to more work from you!
Enjoyed this very much!
What an absolute BLAST! This game had me on edge the entire time. Please make a 2nd one with a much bigger map and a less obvious threat!
I feel like if you lowered the enemy to be only a few pixels higher than the Non-Hostile NPCs, it would really add to it.
Tysm for the feedback man and also I'm way ahead of you 👀 hope you'll enjoy the full game :)
Thanks for playing! :)
I loved the concept of the gamem it was really fun to play
Really suspenseful game where you really feel like you are being followed!
Nice game
That was pretty butt clenching. Nice work! :)
Really cool game! The atmosphere was really good and I love the art style!
Wow this game is interesting! Can't wait to see what Will happen next!
I like the concept and gameplay was amazing! Gave me anxiety when I heard his music lol
We played the game and really enjoyed it! We wanted more :D (I know it's in Greek but anyway)
это просто ахуенно
Thanks
I thought he was giving me a gift😢
i really enjoyed it